Earlier this week I presented the haiku. Today I present the Elizabethan sonnet. The first sonnets appeared in Italy, and is designed for the rhrythmic syncopation of the Italian language, where every other syllable is stressed. Adapted into English, that rhythm is somewhat awkwardly transposed into the iambic pentameter, a line of poetry that consists of 10 syllables, with every even syllable stressed. There are a variety of sonnets, each with its own rhyme scheme. But every sonnet is written in iambic pentameter.
So to write an Elizabethan sonnet you must follow these guidelines:
- There are 14 lines of poetry.
- Each line is written in iambic pentameter.
- The 14 lines are organized into three groups of four lines and a final group of two lines.
- The rhyme scheme is thus: abab/cdcd/efef/gg.
- The last two lines, known as the couplet, either gives the whole poem an unexpected twist, called a volta, or it resolves the conflicts, tensions or issues in the previous stanzas.
This sonnet, dedicated to the Thames River that flows through London, was written when two events occurred months apart.
First there was an uproar when it was discovered that Coca Cola had been bottling their Dasani brand bottled water from the Thames. If you’ve ever been to London, you probably threw up a little just thinking about drinking out of its storied banks; like most urban rivers, it is polluted if not toxic. It just confirmed my stubborn insistence on drinking tap water. And that bottled water a) is a sham, b) contributes to a massive amount of plastic waste, and c) enriches corporations for what should be overflowingly free.
The second event was the London bombings. I felt these two events were related, as they were manifestations of a wayward path humans have been stumbling through. And they contrasted with the timeless Thames, which has witnessed its fair share of human folly, and eventually will outlast it.
Ode to the Thames
Thames water bottled as Dasani Springs
Is Coke’s mad grab to make another buck
It is a sign the world is faltering
The end is near. Maybe there’s no such luck
Undrinkable, the Old Man floats down stream
Drifting past stone, black brick, red steel, new glass
Centuries fade to fog and undreamt dreams
My heartbeat life blinks brief ‘gainst it’s great past
Months later when I’m finally in your arms
The truth that life is fragile bursts apart
When Yorkshire men twisted the Tube with bombs
And allowed fear and hate another start
But on this rare sunny spring day I sense
The old river forgives, it’s heart immense
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